The chart depicts proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat associated with three different diet programs. The mentioned parameters are average diet, healthy diet and healthy diet for sport.
It is clear from the diagram that people engaged in sports activities required to take a healthy sport diet consisting of high amount of carbohydrate (60%). whereas, folks who follow healthy diet gets 50% carbohydrate followed by 40% carbohydrate intake by persons who practice average diet life style.
In contrast, protein content shows the exact reverse trend. Where average diet practitioners consumes high amount of protein of 40% followed by healthy diet and healthy diet for sport practitioners. Which accounts to 30% and 25% respectively.
A noticeable fact is that, the fat content in all three diet programs are very less. it is almost equal (20%) in average diet and healthy diet practice followed by healthy diet for sport (15%).
In conclusion, all the three diet practices are helpful in maintaining healthy life style. but choice of option clearly depends up on personal choice and interest.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Whereas
...ing of high amount of carbohydrate 60%. whereas, folks who follow healthy diet gets 50%...
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Message: “whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ing of high amount of carbohydrate 60%. whereas, folks who follow healthy diet gets 50%...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... all three diet programs are very less. it is almost equal 20% in average diet and...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...pful in maintaining healthy life style. but choice of option clearly depends up on ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, whereas, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35632183908 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80266562431 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557471264368 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1230151846 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7272727273 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8181818182 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262270996533 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124798992432 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159098887397 0.0843802449381 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177148264969 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142145553314 0.0819641961636 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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