Nowadays it is very hard to find parks and play grounds in cities, because authorities think that it is a actually a date of money. They are always interested in investing in industrial development only, but this will adversely affect the living patterns of the people who resides in the cities.
Currently, we can see that most of the cities are suffering from air pollution problem, because of the vast number of vehicles on the road and industries located in the city centres. In order to reduce the effect of this polluted air, authorities should construct more green belts like public parks around the city. Moreover, city dwellers life is always been settled in a flat or a small apartment, they don't get enough space to relax and enjoy. This will adversity affect their physical and mental health. Furthermore, life in cities are more self centred, nobody has any social connects outside of their circle, because every day they are doing the same routine. They don't get a chance to meet and socialise with others. However, if they get facilities like public parks, play grounds and squares people will definitely make use it.
On top of that, recent studies revealed that young bloods in cities are lacking physical and mental health, they are always siting at home wasting their time on mobile phones or computers. So in order encourage people to get out the house and do some activities, authorities should construct adequate places. In addition public place like parks, play grounds and squares are the face of a well balanced city. If we take the example of worlds famous cities like London and Paris, they all have these facilities in common
In short, we can not term a city is well balanced unless and until it has the facilities for the well being of it's people. People don't consider a concrete jungle as sustainable city. The governments should give proper importance to construct social places for the people residing in cities.
- The pie charts below show the online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishme 61
- The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 64
- The chart below shows the amount of time that 10 to 15 year olds spend chatting on the Internet and playing on games consoles on an average school day in the UK 68
- The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advanced technology which can prevent and solve a crime Do you agree or disagree 68
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...s, because authorities think that it is a actually a date of money. They are alwa...
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Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'dwellers'' or 'dweller's'?
Suggestion: dwellers'; dweller's
...c parks around the city. Moreover, city dwellers life is always been settled in a flat o...
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Line 3, column 406, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ed in a flat or a small apartment, they dont get enough space to relax and enjoy. Th...
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Line 3, column 672, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...y they are doing the same routine. They dont get a chance to meet and socialise with...
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Line 5, column 313, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...es should construct adequate places. In addition public place like parks, play grounds a...
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Line 7, column 131, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...or the well being of its people. People dont consider a concrete jungle as sustainab...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, in short, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88855421687 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44319072948 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560240963855 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2239327518 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.2 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1333333333 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102810318907 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351388390476 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372090921533 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0663344365076 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244398005586 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.