A friend has agreed to stay in your flat (apartment) and look after it while you are away. You want to give your friend some information about the flat.
Write a letter to this freind. In your letter:
Give information about the flat
Provide any important instructions
Say what he/she should do if there are any problems
Hey Jery,
I am writing to give you some information about the flat so your residence there will be convenient. As we planned I will leave on 23/03/2019 at 8 pm and come back on 22/04/2019. Thus, please come about half an hour before my departure so I can show you the flat. The address is the Third Floor, 23 Sherwood street.
I need you to give some water to the plants every three days and also make sure that the temperature inside is about 20-degree centigrade all the time. If it falls or raises more than 2 degrees, the plants will die immediately. These are the most important things you need to remember.
In case of any issue, please call Jaky, the maintenance man at 2358430 or go to his home on the first floor. He knows all most everything about the equipment in my apartment and there is a fire extinguisher at the entrance which you can use if it is needed. for any emergency contact 112.
See you soon.
Sorena.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 259, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...ance which you can use if it is needed. for any emergency contact 112. See you...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, third, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 792.0 1615.20841683 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 173.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57803468208 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51533437405 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682080924855 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 506.74238477 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6471201783 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247740545125 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825997800695 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944389927827 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141598600137 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612405804216 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 50.2224549098 163% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.39 8.58950901804 74% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 78.4519038076 28% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.