in the future, it may be scientifically possible for people to live for 150 years. this could be good news for individuals but it may have a negative consequence for our world as a whole
what are the benefits and risks of people living 150 years
Imagine a world of endless possibilities, wherewith the help of science and technology can become a reality. Longevity will top the list of wishes that we will want, and to live for up to 150 years, can be achieved in years to come. While people may celebrate this, it may also have some negative effect on the universe as a whole, but in my opinion, I believe that it will be cheering to live a little longer and that 150 years is not bad at all.
To begin with, the world was created for us to live in, this I say from my conviction as a Christian, and that God had designed us as immortals to occupy the earth until sin came through. Be that as it may, living long will benefit the society as people will have long enough time to teach and inculcate proper values, which is something that we are fast losing in our world today, and that has led to the social decay that pervades our society. Secondly, I believe the world would have witnessed more inventions if people lived longer. Imagine if people like Michael Faraday and Albert Einstein just to mention a few, had lived longer, we definitely would have robbed the grave of some of its riches (this is coming from the saying that the richest place on earth is the grave), and they would have most probably given us more scientific discoveries.
Nevertheless, there could be some disadvantages to living a very long time too. If people lived for 150 years, it will greatly affect the quality of life, as they will be burdened with a host of degenerative diseases and sicknesses of the old such as Alzheimer’s and arthritis. Another consequence is that it can put a strain on the resources of a country, an example is Japan, where a huge chunk of their national budget goes into the welfare of the aged and not so productive citizens.
In conclusion, despite some of the downside to long life on earth, I believe we would have enjoyed some priceless and indescribable moments if we lived longer and this cannot be quantified hence this development will largely be a positive one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57880434783 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60312896779 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538043478261 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.9378749425 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.181818182 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.4545454545 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0909090909 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369581316229 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138171398602 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771225154204 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22370919553 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771483936416 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.88 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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