Exploring tourist places are becoming increasingly common nowadays. Many people argue that more people will prefer to limit their holidays within their home country rather than flying overseas for a vacation in the future. I totally agree with this opinion, and this essay will discuss in detail on why I believe that the tourists will choose to make trips within their native country in the future.
People will prefer to travel around their home country to going abroad for a vacation due to the fear of communicable diseases outbreak. Although there are vaccinations available for majority of the infectious diseases, the recent global outbreak of COVID-19 virus has created travel phobia among majority of the tourists. This is evident from the financial loss the airline companies are facing despite of governments lifting the travel ban in majority of the country as a result of COVID-19 pandemic. Airlines have confirmed that people are travelling only if there is an emergency unlike early days due to the fear of acquiring similar unknown catastrophic diseases. Hence, people will prefer to stay back and explore their own nation instead of flying abroad due to this phobia.
Another reason why people make trips within their country is that it is less expensive. Using domestic services is much cheaper than international service especially for people hailing from developing countries. This is common in my home country, India, where majority of the people prefer to travel within the country, because not only they cannot afford overseas trips, but also they do not have any insurance coverage. This trend will remain the same in the future too as far as these developing countries become economically independent to provide travel insurance or financial benefits to its vast majority of population. In short, people will choose to travel within their country due to their financial instability.
In conclusion, many people believe that tourism will be constrained to one's home country and less people will prefer to spend holiday abroad in the future. I completely agree with this opinion because people have developed fear of overseas travelling due to the recent pandemic outbreak; and many people cannot afford international trips especially in developing countries until the country become financially stable to provide travel insurance to its citizens.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'diseases'' or 'disease's'?
Suggestion: diseases'; disease's
... abroad due to the fear of communicable diseases outbreak. Although there are vaccinatio...
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Line 7, column 91, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ll be confined to ones home country and less people will prefer to spend holiday abr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in conclusion, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44011976048 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5830134491 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497005988024 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2047833932 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.785714286 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334853881133 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130811757753 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955959445164 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223382942726 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045100288158 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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