In the modern era, a culture of working parents has increased for a couple of decades. Nowadays it is a heated debate topic that the government should provide financial benefit to the guardians who have young kids. Thus, anyone can stop working and can take care of their children at home. In the essay, merits and demerits of this view will be delved in further paragraphs with relevant examples.
To begin with, the first and foremost benefit is that if local authority is providing child benefits then parents can take the one of the parents leaves to take care of infants or toddlers because they need to be taken care very carefully as they are extremely fragile. In addition, families who have children going to school, the parents have to manage the diet of the kid and prepare breakfast or lunch for their kid and need to manage pick up and drop off timings of school. In Canada, for instance, the canadian government offers the kid benefits as well as 9 months paid maternal and paternal leaves program for parents of newborn because they think the father and mother both should be with the kid during that time span. Furthermore, the dearness inflation also affects the family to bear expenses of the school kids such as education, healthcare. Thus, parents must need to be supported in the form of money by the government.
On the other hand, many times found that people are misusing these types of schemes introduced by the local healthcare systems by producing fake documents for kids. Another disadvantage is that parents might become lazy if they would get money while sitting at home even if they are able to work. As an example, my friend's sister, she was facing too many problems due to the gap in the work in the competitive employment world. Therefore, providing financial benefits without analyzing the condition of parents can affect the career and can make them greedy and lazy as well.
To conclude, I pen down by writing that there is no doubt that the government should provide child benefits to the young kids' families but they need to ensure that the help is going only to needy families as well as they also need to make sure that it should not affect the parents' career in the future. The local authority should also monitor that people are not getting advantage by using fake papers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, no doubt, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1920.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 405.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74074074074 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37746623089 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525925925926 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.2340956466 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146745399958 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510629021207 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444624646414 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979474546812 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426631256625 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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