Usage of rapid transport system in developed countries is in high demand, especially in highly populated cities. Due to increase in population size, on road traffic is also increasing, which leads to more travelling time from one place to other.
Because of this reason government are spending more amount in developing roads, but they should also take care of railways as that could be of greater beneficial, as a public transport.
More vehicles on road leads to immense traffic during office hours, which is a lot time consuming and exhausting. This can be rules out if more people use public transport like inter city train in their routine life. To make the use of such facilities, government should be able to attract their citizens by providing low fares, comfortable seats and punctuality in timings.
Due to unavailability of comfort level and to avoid a lot of hassle during travel time, people often prefer to take their vehicle to their work place. Instead, if government on a serious note takes required step and give satisfactory results to their citizens to use public transport, a lot of time and energy can be saved.
Also due to heavy traffic and rough driving, there are everyday cases of accidents, causing serious injuries and deaths of innocents. This can be avoided if other transport services are opted. Keeping this all things in mind spending more money on railways than on roads is much more feasible, more sensible and proves to be a best option for all citizens.
- Some people believe that government should make investment in building public libraries in every town, while others think it is a waste of money because we have access to information via internet. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 61
- Some people think it is more beneficial to play sports that are played in teams, eg football. However, some people think it is more beneficial to play individual sports e.g tennis and swimming. Discuss both the views give your opinion. 72
- You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect Write a letter to the editor of the magazine In your letter Correct the information in the article Explain why it is impo 77
- With an increasing population communicating via the internet and text messaging, face to face communication will become a thing of the past.To what extent do you agree? 11
- All computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in a classroom. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 167, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'public transport'.
Suggestion: public transport
...that could be of greater beneficial, as a public transport. More vehicles on road leads to imme...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...lot of time and energy can be saved. Also due to heavy traffic and rough driving,...
^^^^
Line 8, column 326, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...easible, more sensible and proves to be a best option for all citizens.
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96031746032 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64253537295 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59126984127 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9026982783 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.636363636 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 7.06120827912 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0887207686106 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0331981571186 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05349234605 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0592810070751 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589745968283 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.