Governments should make education compulsory for all children between 5 to 15 years and this education should be offered free of cost. Do you agree or disagree?
Education for all has been a dream of many educationalists in the past and even today. Many developed countries have already realized this concept and students in those countries are reaping benefits. I believe students across the world should also have the benefit of free pre-primary and primary education as it gives them a chance to learn basic life skills and delivers the government from burden of stipends to unemployed.
Basic education allows one to differentiate between right and wrong, moral and immoral and also helps one in survival. For example, a person who has not been to school might not be able to calculate profit, loss and manythings that are necessary for a decent survival. At the same time, we are aware that many countries are populated with poor who cannot afford basic education and to ensure that they all receive at least basic education, the united nations should come together and ensure that free education is offered in all countries.
Apart from the above mentioned, basic education also increases employability of the youth which in turn reduces the burden on the governments who would otherwise have to bear the burden of unemployed youth. For instance, in the country where I live, there are some provinces where the government is giving financial aid to the unemployed youth every month. This in turn is landing the government in deficit. Instead, the governments should invest in the youth’s education which would eliminate the need for monthly stipends.
To summarize, governments across the world should give primary and secondary education free of cost to all children as it can help the youth in learning survival skills and also make them more employable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, apart from, at least, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13571428571 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71971027494 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535714285714 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.8125901998 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.727272727 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316406958785 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117909705911 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672092946843 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197346609288 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402589577819 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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