A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Over centuries people had been using animals to suffice their day to day needs of foods, research and for other works. Some believes that it should not be enslaved rather provide the same rights as mankind, while other demand to exploit as per their needs. I strongly condemned mankind taking advantage of animals.
It is obvious that animals also a living being in the world and they should have the same rights as mankind, they should be let free instead of keeping them in a cage and controlling their freedom. This is often seen in many rich people's house as they have plenty of animals in the name of providing shelter though it is not allowed by the animal welfare commission. So it better to make the animals free from slavery and other uses.
Humans in ancient does not have food cultivation so they are highly dependent on hunting animals for their food and also they use the animal skins as a cloths for their nuclear family. Hunting animals was also considered a pride for mankind and bravery act then later during the civilization animals were considered to be used mainly for medical research to overcome today's challenging virus faced by the world. So using animals for benefits of human is not a new and it is a followed from ancient days.
Though the obtained benefits from animals are to support human well-being, my view point towards harming animals should be avoided as an individual and also government should come up with strong rules to protect them from such abuse.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'betters', 'wells'?
Suggestion: betters; wells
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a cloth' or simply 'cloths'?
Suggestion: a cloth; cloths
...d and also they use the animal skins as a cloths for their nuclear family. Hunting anima...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rules to protect them from such abuse.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, then, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77307692308 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3472601427 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561538461538 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.5640982761 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.1 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.453968268115 0.244688304435 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172187383586 0.084324248473 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807487203896 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262291257359 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565547936793 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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