The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?
Over the past few decades, technology has tremendously revolutionised the way of shopping. Some believe that online shopping demand has surged radically and can replace mortar and brick shops. In this essay, I will argue why online shopping is the future of our generation.
To begin with, there are people who prefer to visit stores over online shopping. These people view virtual shopping to be answered, as they are highly concerned about online payments. For example, there are various online theft instances recorded, which has left people wary. Provided that they feel scared and do not want to encounter any unwanted experience. Clearly, this shows why people like visiting shopping malls and cannot trust online shopping.
Although online shopping can be risky, it offers convenience to the customers. A growing number of people, including me, think that people nowadays have a tight schedule; they find it hard to make time for shopping. Making an online purchase not only saves their time, but also energy. Also that the order is seamlessly delivered at one’s doorstep, which greatly saves time. In India, for instance, e-commerce industry has massively gained recognition, thanks to online shopping; retailers there are focused to open more online shopping platforms. Therefore, online shopping offers ease to shoppers, which makes it superior over visiting the stores.
To conclude, online shopping increasing popularity can put back local shops. I think that it can become possible in the near future because online shopping has made our lives convenient rather effortless.
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Suggestion: Also,
...only saves their time, but also energy. Also that the order is seamlessly delivered ...
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Suggestion:
...ase to shoppers, which makes it superior over visiting the stores. To conclude...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57184758491 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7055897374 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.6875 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.625 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226760400469 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082256909413 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521576047081 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148723378761 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0116068734508 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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