Indubitably, online shopping has become more attractive to shopaholics because of the advent of the technological world. It is often argued that local shops in towns and cities will lead to a decline because of ongoing trend of online shopping. And, I partially agree with this given notion.
Apparently, the widespread use of e-shopping platforms is accelerating dramatically and has many reasons to substantiate it. The first prominent reason is the cutting edge technology offers a better lifestyle in an unprecedented fashion. In simpler words, a consumer can buy anything they need around the clock with the touch of button and the product will be delivered to their desired location such as homes. Apart from this, online shopping provides a numerous range of options while selecting an item or a product. For instance, buying a phone on an Amazon or Flipkart, one can get an ample amount of choices by checking multiple factors such as brands, price range, model no, device type, and many others. These facilities will definitely force many businesses to go online and many to close.
On the other hand, there will be still demand for shopping malls, complexes, and street stores in the future. This is because a certain number of shoppers still want a more tactile shopping experience. In other words, a customer still want to see, touch, and feel the product before purchasing. This way, not only they can get the tangible experience , but also take products home instantaneously after buying it. For example, people will only buy fruits and veggies from the market after checking the freshness of a product which cannot be done online. Also, such kind of shopping provides an assurance of quality to the consumer.
To conclude, physical shops business may have reduce due to the advent of online shopping but, it has never close or obsolete from the modern life because there are some products in the market which sells only because of it's excellent quality.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an unprecedented fashion" with adverb for "unprecedented"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ge technology offers a better lifestyle in an unprecedented fashion. In simpler words, a consumer can buy a...
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Line 5, column 351, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nly they can get the tangible experience , but also take products home instantaneo...
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Line 7, column 47, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'reduced'.
Suggestion: reduced
...clude, physical shops business may have reduce due to the advent of online shopping bu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, if, may, so, still, while, apart from, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04587155963 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65953634144 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60244648318 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8719345025 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.125 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1875 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234732131923 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781018105484 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713355872848 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158308348412 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687813600644 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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