Holidays honor people or events. If you could create a new holiday, what person or event would it honor and how would you want people to celebrate it? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Holidays help to rejuvenate your mind and gave a sense of revitalizing your muscles from a daily hectic routine. A plethora of days that we celebrate each year in remembrance of any occasion like "Independence Day " or any person like "Teachers Day" and so on. If I have a chance to choose a day that we have to spend with a particular purpose than I would like to add a "Help the Needy without Recognition". In this essay, I will explain what to do on that day.
First of all, you have to list the people who have to deal with a great amount of effort to meet their ends. For example, they could be your relatives, neighbours, co-workers and even a cleaning man in your office or road. What will be your next step then? Well, give them some money or pay their children fee for school or university, a gift of their need or an assurance that you are always there for them.
Secondly, help does not just to be financial support, it could be more than this. To illustrate this, you can visit old age houses to meet these people who are abandoned by their families and spread happiness by a hug, smile or a word of condolence. In this way, you are helping them to cope up with their stress or anxiety and by your action, they can feel that you are his/her family member, someone whom they can share their grievances. To add more, a handsome amount of people starved each day and get died troublesome fighting for their life or even commit suicide. We can raise a charity even if it at a small level by getting help with your circle to get these people life going. So, they never think to take precious life that Allah gave them.
To sum up, this day will bring happiness and a sense of satisfaction to a person who is doing all the chores to help individuals. I suggest that every person must commemorate this day one by one so everyone knows that there is always someone there for you.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 390, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...icular purpose than I would like to add a 'Help the Needy without Recognitio...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 24.0651302605 229% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43220338983 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60314834538 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542372881356 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3408324641 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0625 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148509991197 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500125943357 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.02448780978 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847962499972 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228527339811 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 390, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...icular purpose than I would like to add a 'Help the Needy without Recognitio...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 24.0651302605 229% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43220338983 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60314834538 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542372881356 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3408324641 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0625 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148509991197 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500125943357 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.02448780978 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847962499972 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228527339811 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.