Homelessness is increasing in many major cities around the world. What do you think are the main causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?
In this day and age, the phenomenon is rising on the level of homelessness in some major cities. This trend is mainly due to dependence on the raise of the house and being addicted to drug or alcohol. However, there are a number of measures that can be implemented to resolve the issue of this problem.
To begin with, there are many reason which describe on the rise on the percentage of homelessness. Firstly, It is clear that some people cannot afford their own accomodation as house prices have soared beyond their means and they have fewer option in choosing a place to live, which is easy for them to be homelessness. According to the recent study, 90% house’s prices is considered unaffordable. Secondly, some people are drug or alcohol addicts who struggle to function in normal society, thus, it is easy for them to live in the street. For example, Paul Gascoigne, who is the former footballer of England, experienced a homelessness life because of addicting to alcohol.
However, there are many solutions for this phenomenom. First, it is essential for some government to have some program for low-income people and the unemployed to buy a free or affordable house. For instance, there are a program for some poor people in Ha Noi to buy some cheap house. Secondly, some people who struggle with drug or alcohol problems should be given proper treatment to treat these diseases. For instance, it has some organization on rehab drug addiction for some young people who test positive for drug.
In conclusion, the unaffordable price of houses and being addicted to drug or alcohol is the main reason for homelessness. Only when having some affordable house and operate some organization for rehab these diseases, will this situation be remedied.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reasons'.
Suggestion: many reasons
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Line 4, column 221, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'programs'?
Suggestion: programs
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95608108108 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79309769296 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503378378378 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1605063878 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0911559785885 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482243042931 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480779449321 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863749239734 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726862640247 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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