The best way to increase road safety is to make car drivers retake their driving test every year. Do you agree or disagree?
Some individuals believe that updating the driving lisence anually is the best way to create road safety. For my perspective, that is one of many ways to maintain safety for commuters in traffic in this day and age.
There are many beneficial point which claim that car drivers should retake their driving test each year. It is clear that regular testing will ensure that people countinue to be attentive and careful when they commute on road. As a result, they are albe to avoid any accident which could happen immediately. Moreover, since roady system is both developing and mordernising, people will be able to learn the correct way to approach them, which mean that they will prevent themselves from being fined by any inevitable fault.
On the other hand, despite the positive point of retake the lisence, I believe that there are others factor which can remain the safety for the drivers. Firstly, Government should use an advertisement campaign via several method, such as TV Program and newspapers.Thus, they might remain some people to drive with appropriate way to protect their health. For instance, Vietnamese government has created an events, called “ a traffic safety month”, in order to remind the awareness of these commuter so that they can drive safety on road. Moreover, the ubiqitous of cctv camera on road might be another way to require this individual to have a good sense in the traffic unless they will be fined anytime.
In short, there are more factors that can adress the problem of road safety, but retake the driving competition is only one of them. In fact, I would argue that both updating the license is not important than both an advertisement campaign and using a cctv camera on every angle of road.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun method seems to be countable; consider using: 'several methods'.
Suggestion: several methods
...hould use an advertisement campaign via several method, such as TV Program and newspapers.Thus...
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Suggestion: Thus
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an event' or simply 'events'?
Suggestion: an event; events
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Suggestion: this commuter; these commuters
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in fact, in short, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91186440678 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55388129738 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569491525424 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.614293461 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.75 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229184816329 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08784051428 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716999259333 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135658135313 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0153018157839 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.