Human activity has negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe that actions could be taken to bring about a change.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Various human deeds are the reason for extinct of several plants and animals from the ecosystem. Some people opine that such behavior of people will continue regardless of any issues because other assume that some methods could be applied to replace those habits of human. This essay will highlight both views in detail and explain why certain measures must be undertaken to cut aforesaid impacts on animals and plants.
To begin with, people are incompetent to understand the dire consequences of their actions on other living things. They presume cutting few trees or hunting some animals won’t create harmful effect but they are oblivious to acknowledge that several other people are also carrying out same steps and positing the similar thoughts. In mountains of Nepal, snow leopard was main reason for tourist attraction but now they are among endangered animals list and could be visualized very rarely. This has also abated the tourist numbers on that locality to a great extent. Therefore, prior to any catastrophic effect on environment or locality, masses should forbid such actions of theirs that could imbalance the ecosystem.
Nonetheless, government are considered to play a key role in mitigating such issues by implementing strict laws against people associated with such acts. In other word, people involved in actions such as deforestation, hunting, etc. should be punished so with fines or unpaid community services or even custodial sentence if severe enough to harm the environment and its habitants. For example, in India, renowned actor Salman Khan was in custody for several days because he was accused of killing an endangered deer in a village while shooting for his film. He was presented in court for several trial and spent few days in prison. Had there been no rules, would he even be arrested? Therefore, such rules will aware people and make them more conscious before committing such deeds.
In conclusion, I believe government has the responsibility to conserve those plants and animals and divide penalty to those who incorporate in harming the environment and its habitant. Moreover, I also feel people should recognize their actions as early as possible and try to avoid them because self-realization is the most important thing after all.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 487, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'rarely' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...imals list and could be visualized very rarely. This has also abated the tourist numbe...
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Line 5, column 590, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun trial seems to be countable; consider using: 'several trials'.
Suggestion: several trials
...his film. He was presented in court for several trial and spent few days in prison. Had there...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, therefore, while, after all, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25068119891 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70776695286 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599455040872 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0146659335 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.352941176 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5882352941 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214825085346 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659774860215 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485412678185 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137533582803 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077708945548 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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