With the steep rise in the air travel, the environment is deteriorating rapidly, which is of great worry for several nations. Some reckon that enforcement of extra cess on air tickets would restrict the individuals from using the air transport. In my opinion, I partially agree with the above mentioned statement as it is not the clear solution to curb the problem.
First and foremost, levying the huge tax on air fare would reduce the use of airplanes to some extent. As the tickets would be expensive, few people would avoid travelling through air frequently and consequently it will lessen the air pollution to a certain degree. Hiking the air transport cost would benefit the airlines, which in turn would improve the services and subsequently benefit the passengers. To exemplify, ticket of Qatar Airways is rather quite expensive in comparison to other airlines but amenities they offer is comfortable and luxurious.
But this is not the perfect solution to bring down the pollution level. Certain other measures should be employed to limit the situation. Alternatively, other source of transport like electric trains should be put to use for longer distance travel. Commuters would use electric trains instead of domestic airlines for travelling to another state in a country. Further, with the advent of new technology, special planes should be manufactured which use bio-diesel as a fuel as it emits less amount of pollutants. Another source is the solar power, which should be harnessed to minimize the contaminants in the environment. For instance, a solar power based plane was put on trail to travel farther distances and it successfully accomplished the task.
To encapsulate, escalating the fee of air journey would not resolve the problem in a definite manner, other measures like bio-diesel and alternate environment friendly forms of transport should also be deployed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, so, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26072607261 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91812635901 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557755775578 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7782818565 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.266666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132391019892 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468594120293 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042490659082 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791574673802 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283873997773 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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