Family plays a significant role in everyone lives. However, we can not deny that friends are the support system of that life. In my opinion, both family and friends are equally essential.
Primarily, when a child takes birth, the first few people he or she recognizes are the family members. Further, the child receives basic elementary education like learning small words and manners from blood relations. Family helps in shaping the character of a person. They nurture good human values and ethics and the child imbibes them. One feels secure and protected within the family. One gains physical strength and mental support from the family. Family prepares and teaches the child to face the harsh environment of the outside world. Even if the child is away from the family for study or job reason, one acquires fortitude by just talking to the family members. For instance, students who go abroad for higher education, converse with their parents frequently to avoid homesickness.
On the other side, friends are life support of a person. One is blessed with family by God, but he chooses the friends by his own choice. Good friends always assist, especially, during the opposite circumstances. One learns a lot from friends during a younger age. In addition to this, one discusses a few issues with friends only which he hesitates to ask from family. To substantiate my point, a person debates about the career and job-related issues better with friends instead of blood or close relatives.
To conclude, blood relatives are vital in shaping the personality of a person. Similarly, companions are also crucial for the growth of a man.
- The impact that the growing demand for more flights has had on the environment is a major concern for many countries. Some people believe that one way to limit the number of people travelling by air is to increase tax on flights.To what extent do you agre 73
- It is more important to have a good family than to have friends. Family can always compensate for absence of friendship.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, similarly, so, for instance, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05147058824 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58956140827 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3735273576 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.7 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125429193243 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414237888602 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399344324101 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0747793337892 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043013093684 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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