The important of mobile phone in education
It is believed that in the cooperate world mobile phone has played a significant role in educating students, especially those are in high schools. In my view, the benefits of using mobile phone give to high school students is undoubted because of following reasons:
First of all, In this modern society, advanced technology gives students enormous information to access with the world. Mobile phone nowadays is considered as "the best assistant" for them to search information, materials, or even develop their self-development skills. For example, many apps or tools can help high school students to develop their habits of learning or manage their time more effectively. According to some research, thanks to mobile phones, high school students find it easy to deal with many difficult subjects like Maths, Chemistry. For example, Teachers can take advantage of cell phones to provide students with resources to find more information about the topic or online discussion to encourage students to participate in the lessons, share their thoughts or ideas. Last but not least, this can be especially helpful for students who might not be comfortable speaking in class to encourage them to get involved in-class discussion, teamwork, or presentation. It's will inactive students have chances to interact with friends and teachers.
In a nutshell, modern technology, especially mobile phones give high school students more chance to stay on top of their class, find academic material to support their exams, and encourage them to self-develop to be better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, for example, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42213114754 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91465486471 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598360655738 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.441444597 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.0 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1111111111 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16599539156 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798448615931 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081497991852 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158483904091 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0964139236172 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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