Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. Do you agree or disagree?
It is irrefutable that health, education and trade are the basic needs for all the nations to grow and develop, therefore the state of wealthy nations should facilitate the poorer nations in these sectors. I agree with the view and believe it will bridge the gap between nations and provide an opportunity for poor nations to grow.
Clearly, there are enormous benefits for the world to support poorer nations. Firstly, support in health care will improve the hospitality of the underprivileged nation and their basic hygiene as well. For instance, we have often seen the doctors doing volunteer jobs in other nations with the support of government to benefit the infected nations, which will minimize the risk of spread of infection on other parts of the world. Such as, detection of Swine flu infection in South Africa had affected the number of people there, which raise an alarm at UNO and the team of international doctors visited there to stop the spread of infection
Secondly, trade support from the wealthy country will support the economy of the needy nation. The job market will make their people independent and skilled to do business and other earning activities. Industrialization support by opening industries in the poor nation will open the job market for the local people and individuals can earn to support their family and needs. For illustration, often government of India invites foreign direct investments to international players so that the job market for Indians can be widened and people can have a source of income.
In conclusion, assistance to poor nations of the world by the rich nations is necessary and these wealthy countries should this charge in favour of global scale development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09187279152 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71421797865 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540636042403 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.6286884982 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.1 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294105618235 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130110454409 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864903056807 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185581193092 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0952805442391 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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