With the increase in the use of mobile phones and computers, fewer people are writing letters. Some people think that the traditional skill of writing letters will disappear completely.
How important do you think letter writing is? Do you thin letter writing will completely disappear?
Nowadays, with rapid growth of technology and also presentation of social networks people do communicate with each other easily in least amount of time. They can discuss with each other on subjects on line and can get their answer at the moment. This essay will shed some light on this argument and try to analysis it before arriving at conclusion.
The first positive point that is important in writing letter is the feeling of letter writing on paper with ink has a unforgettable feeling for both, writer and reader and also some time readers read the letter on their mind with writer voice, so that it has direct effect on readers mind. Hand writing letter and sending them through post offices even can touch readers heart in some emotional relationship. Moreover, in writing letter people try to use correct grammar more than when they write any messages on computer or on their smart phones, because letters are more formal than other writings, thus the grammar of every language in the world will be protect and use in right places. For instance, we use contraction sentence in their emails or messages but in hand writing letter we never use it. Furthermore, it is obvious that words have deep effect on everybody. Writing letter get this opportunity to check their writing before we want to send, but on line conversation do not has this option, and use wrong text in our chat may never to be forgotten.
At the conclusion, in my opinion, because of advanced technology and use of communication equipment such as mobile phone, tablet or laptop and also video calls every time everywhere, people do not want to use traditional ways for their relationships, and step by step writing letters is getting forgotten. Unfortunately, we are evidence that the number of post box in houses are decreasing and it shows that nobody in not wait for receiving letter from others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the least'.
Suggestion: in the least
...e do communicate with each other easily in least amount of time. They can discuss with e...
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Line 4, column 117, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...of letter writing on paper with ink has a unforgettable feeling for both, writer ...
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Line 4, column 989, Rule ID: DONT_NEEDS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have'?
Suggestion: have
...o send, but on line conversation do not has this option, and use wrong text in our ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, may, moreover, so, thus, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8785046729 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60017326357 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535825545171 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.1766770234 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.363636364 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1818181818 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342756126441 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121030490169 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785439366789 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209274785588 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100152793256 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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