You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work.
Write a letter to the manager of the organization where you have been working in your letter
Dear Sir/Madam:
I am Amir Nazaripoor who is your volunteer work force in your organization since you established your company. My duty is teaching to under 10 years old children who want to learn English language as a second language. Unfortunately, at this moment I cannot continue my work. I know that this farewell annoying my heart, yet I have to go because I should immigrate to another city which is far away, for continuing my life with my parents. Fortunately, I have a good song, my childhood friend Mr. Rezai wants to join to your community instead of me. He has a Ielts certification with high score and has a good experience on teaching to children, I promise you that he can help you more than me.
Your kind consideration would be highly appreciated.
Sincerely yours
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 558, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...to your community instead of me. He has a Ielts certification with high score and...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ideration would be highly appreciated. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 657.0 937.175257732 70% => OK
No of words: 137.0 206.0 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79562043796 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42121322205 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97326786671 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.722627737226 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 202.5 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7792776735 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8571428571 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236351221581 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100880351135 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683939138199 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13296433702 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703592403214 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.