An increased number of people today change their career and living places in their lives. Is it a positive or negative development?
It is often said that these days, majority of individuals are inclined to switch their professional occupation and give preference to relocation. This essay will argue the advantages outweighs the disadvantages
To being with, the primary advantage of changing existing job and work location is that it helps to elevate ones skillsets. When you work for the same organization for some time, you get to learn to most of the things that are required for current job. However, it does not give you opportunities to learn something out of your domain. Changing workplace to join different company certainly helps you to learn different things and make you eligible to earn more salary as well. To cite an example, a report conducted by US company in the year of 2019 stated that 12% of IT professional had changed their career from IT to project management to earn more salary. Furthermore, changing work location introduce you to different culture as well. Therefore, switching jobs and location certainly have advantages.
Despite various advantages, this trend has numerous disadvantages. To begin with, changing frequent jobs raise a question on your stability. If an individual keep on changing the jobs just to satisfy their desire to learn new things, then they will never get an expertise on one particular domain. For instance, a UK company reported that in year 2019, 12% of SoftwareOne employees’ resigned to learn new technology; however their existing experience with their core role was just 8 months. Moreover, changing work location sometimes does not cooperate with your health as well. It has been observed that many individual have reported health issues after relocating to different locations. Thus, switching jobs and location certainly have different disadvantages.
To conclude, this essay argued that there are more pros than cons. In my opinion, changing jobs and work location is certainly a good decision to make yourself comfortable with new technologies. If Company may come forward with some policies, where they will grant internal job posting to their employees in their desirable domain then organization will be in the position to retain their staff.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1846.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2893982808 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87729592936 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535816618911 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6957952957 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.555555556 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3888888889 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145190363364 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044653663152 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526263825343 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096681088069 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325834438362 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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