An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages?
A number of people are increasingly making their shopping through online ads. Although I agree that this habit has advantages, I disagree that it outweighs its disadvantages. Different aspects and examples and set up for discussion in this essay.
On the one hand, online shopping is convenient, For instance, a housewife can get all her home needs with just one click and every item can be delivered to her doorstep. Furthermore, it has an abundance of products at competitive prices which bans having a monopoly. Consequently, the customer gets the best products at the most reasonable prices thanks to the variety of displayed items online. Thus, shopping online has become number one in numerous countries.
On the other hand, buying online cannot be suitable in buying everything. For example, shoes cannot be bought online the customer will need to try it on before making the decision of buying it. Moreover, shopping online makes people sedentary. Because shopping in itself can be considered as a way of exercising and limiting it can be harmful to our health. Hence, the traditional way of shopping has multiple benefits and should be kept as it is.
To encapsulate, I believe that shopping online has many advantages but I also second the traditional way of shopping from malls. If I had the chance, I would definitely recommend that one should have a melange of both to balance their buying options, keep healthy habits in their daily routines and avoid being monopolized by the sellers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, so, thus, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0843373494 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8376158437 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59437751004 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6249655267 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4285714286 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112176373554 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427166596355 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418124571885 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0661637667799 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0138758609779 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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