Nowadays a lot of professional workers emigrate to more successfully places in the world. Although the issue is grown up year in by year, the government of the undeveloped countries try solve to stop it.
It is try, graduated people and skilled laborers leave the homeland to get a chance to better life. Generally, low salary and high cost children's education are forced families to move to other developed nations. If you do not pay off food and apartment you can not survive. Additionally, the doctors save our lives and the theaters save our society, for this reasons they mast have the best of high technologically equipment.
The chairmen of poor country can change this situation on opposite. Firstly, the country's economic have to have freedom, because any penny waste on a sensitizes today is doubled income tomorrow. From every dollar of made profit will pay a taxes, that give money on the generation's education and the medicine care. The leaved emigrants won't be returned, but the huge quantity of prepared to leave can stay at home.
More difficulty problem is a salary of successfully employee can be change to positive too. The national produce is generated by middle level firms. For instance one of more decision is a gap year in pay of taxes for company with short list of members. In this case the owners can attract high quality specialists by high salary, that improve the environment in country.
In conclusion, this topic is a particular for modern world and the government mast do all of possible to find solve. Not one the capital is developed county, but else more right human resource management.
- A foreign friend of yours plans to visit your place and stay with you but you do not have time on that date Give your friend another alternate date to come 70
- The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. 67
- An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation? 61
- People often do not interact with their neighbours and this is harming community building What are the possible causes and solutions 77
- A foreign friend of yours plans to visit your place and stay with you but you do not have time on that date Give your friend another alternate date to come In your letter you should apology for it explain what you will busy for on that date suggest to him 10
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... and the theaters save our society, for this reasons they mast have the best of high...
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Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uipment. The chairmen of poor country can change this situation on opposite. F...
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Line 5, column 239, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a tax' or simply 'taxes'?
Suggestion: a tax; taxes
...om every dollar of made profit will pay a taxes, that give money on the generations edu...
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Line 5, column 271, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'generations'' or 'generation's'?
Suggestion: generations'; generation's
...ill pay a taxes, that give money on the generations education and the medicine care. The le...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92753623188 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74344036355 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626811594203 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1058051878 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.0 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15623670188 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464873981255 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045955169615 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0749905679042 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350144491172 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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