Undoubtedly, the Internet has revolutionized the communication and discovered its place in the individual lives. Many people believe that the use of social network and instant messaging services has a dramatic growth and as a result of that direct connection is fading of the modern lives. In my point of view, network communication absolutely has especial advantages which caused it to be popular; nevertheless, face to face relationships and meeting preserve its own value for people.
The face to face connection never could be replaced with network, when people communicate in person, it contains body language and expressing of feelings with body movements or voice intonations, however, text messaging is a bunch of words that the readers might not comprehend the exact meaning of the sender or the emotion lying behind the text. Therefore, because of this uncertainty, people prefer to meet each other when discussing serious subjects.
On the other hand, the internet has a major utility of remove distance between two people who live far from each other. In fact, the internet eliminates the time and the place limitation. Moreover, it eradicates the homesickness for close friends or family members. So, the use of internet influences communication significantly, which might make people consider that it would take the face to face communication's place.
In conclusion, the rate of connecting to the internet with the purpose of keeping in touch with others enhance recently, that leads people to concern about direct communication to be forgotten.
However, social networks or instant messaging has their own benefits and faced with welcoming many people, particularly the youth, interact the real emotion in a conversation among people, via the internet, is the weakness belongs to it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ing preserve its own value for people. The face to face connection never could ...
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... the face to face communications place. In conclusion, the rate of connecting to...
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'in conclusion', 'in fact', 'as a result', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.278481012658 0.247107183377 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.136075949367 0.155533422707 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0727848101266 0.0946595960268 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0474683544304 0.0501214627716 95% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0284810126582 0.0437548338989 65% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126582278481 0.122226691241 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0348101265823 0.0403226058552 86% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.02156714667 2.80594681477 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0284810126582 0.0326793684256 87% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.110759493671 0.0861772015684 129% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0126582278481 0.021408717616 59% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0158227848101 0.011925033212 133% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1810.0 1933.35771543 94% => OK
No of words: 283.0 316.048096192 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.39575971731 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.409893992933 0.374742101984 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.318021201413 0.28420135186 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.233215547703 0.203846283523 114% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.148409893993 0.137316102897 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02156714667 2.80594681477 108% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.037074148 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56890459364 0.56093040696 101% => OK
Word variations: 59.2826586091 60.7387585426 98% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0891783567 68% => OK
Sentence length: 25.7272727273 20.7743622355 124% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.6147510901 49.517814964 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.545454545 127.492653851 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7272727273 20.7743622355 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.909090909091 0.814263465372 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 57.5293928686 49.1944974215 117% => OK
Elegance: 2.07462686567 1.69124875643 123% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416455376889 0.332605444948 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.141118170732 0.102741220458 137% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0559775598629 0.0668466124924 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.668211697194 0.534860350844 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.206186945129 0.148594505496 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.20098996296 0.134430193775 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873788187916 0.0742795772207 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.363724937118 0.324371583561 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0418395150747 0.0638462369009 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290717487421 0.228012699653 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320584239427 0.058150111329 55% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.