Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?
some people argue that adding extra charge on petrol will be a great solution to overcome challenges related to traffic and pollution. I completely agree with this notion due to the possibility of lessening the number of private vehicle running on the road. some other initiatives from the government can be to make the parking charge higher and adding additional tax on the purchase of vehicle. In this essay, I will discuss these concepts with relevant examples.
To begin with, if the price of petrol rise higher, then people will be less dependent on using private vehicle. They will not only avoid taking car for short distance, but will also increase their practice of using public transportation for longer distance. As a result, less car will be in the street to cause carbon emission and disruption on travel. Singapore has introduced extra tax on petrol since 2006 and a number research has identified it as the key reason behind government's success on controlling environmental problem and traffic.
On the other hand, number of car moving in the city can be minimized by adding extravagant charge on parking. For instance, hardly any Londoners would drive their car in the city center due to the limitation related to parking spot. Another measure like adding tax on any purchase of car can drastically reduce the number of new car entering in the road every year. this way number of transportation will not increase and people will not have to worry about the disruption causing by too many vehicles on the road. also, it is needless to say that the environment will be benefitted through this too.
To conclude, an increase in the price of petrol will certainly play the most significant role in limiting the disturbance causing by rise of private transportation. Similarly, high taxation on the purchase of car and extra charge on parking would make the process even faster.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, similarly, so, then, for instance, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97798742138 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71937678276 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525157232704 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0618621438 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.533333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0933964136046 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354191379143 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0250408785774 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0623314019536 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00908281815077 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.