Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problem.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
What other measures do you think might be effective?
Growing traffic and pollution are among the prominent concern of cities nowadays. Its been argued widely that rise in price of petrol will be the most suitable way to solve these issues. However, I believe that this solution is not appropriate according to the problem, i am totally disagree with it. The best option is to encourage people to use public transport instead of own their vehicle.
To commence with, hike in cost of gas would change nothing. On opposite it would lead to distress and anger among society against government. this course of action would lead to an extra financial burden on the shoulder of individuals. Which might not got for the ruling party for upcoming election, as it could be one of the main point for opposition election campaign. In addition to that, pollution is not only causing by cars on roads but there are lots of other factors to, For instance:- the smoke from factories and industries would be an other reason.these changes will only contribute to hardly 5% to reduce the pollution level.
As we all know, every situation has unique fix. For these the topmost think we can do is to boost people to use public transport. For the shorter distance they need to use Buses or they can go eco-friendly by using bikes or by walking. Moreover, the local leadership needs to improve the infrastructure the roads need to be wider and there should be more lanes. So that in rush hours traffic can move smoothly.
In conclusion, escalating charges on gas would reduce some traffic and pollution, some person maybe out from streets for few days but that effect would not be long-lasting. The one who want to use it will use it on any cost . Thats why we need to change some structure to make difference in scenario.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 306 350
No. of Characters: 1407 1500
No. of Different Words: 184 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.182 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.598 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.481 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 91 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 68 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 45 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.125 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.164 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.312 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.282 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.505 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.068 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t appropriate according to the problem, i am totally disagree with it. The best o...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
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Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...anger among society against government. this course of action would lead to an extr...
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Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... this course of action would lead to an extra financial burden on the shoulder o...
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Message: Did you mean 'another'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: another
... from factories and industries would be an other reason.these changes will only contribu...
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Line 5, column 363, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e wider and there should be more lanes. So that in rush hours traffic can move smoothly...
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Line 7, column 224, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...o want to use it will use it on any cost . Thats why we need to change some struct...
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Line 7, column 227, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...ant to use it will use it on any cost . Thats why we need to change some structure to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74183006536 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58454225584 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604575163399 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0417718834 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3529411765 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52941176471 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144754021496 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394258855652 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415338290397 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841977568477 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498600593103 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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