The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I
... increased with the advent of internet. i strongly believe that this is best thin...
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Suggestion: is the best
... internet. i strongly believe that this is best thing that happened to humankind. this ...
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... best thing that happened to humankind. this essay will first discuss how internet h...
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Suggestion: People
...ed ingenious ways of getting knowledge. people,who want to get education from institut...
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...enious ways of getting knowledge. people,who want to get education from institutes w...
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Suggestion: For
...ng at home, in front of their computer. for example,thanks to MOOC,'Massive op...
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... in front of their computer. for example,thanks to MOOC,'Massive open online cours...
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...eir computer. for example,thanks to MOOC,'Massive open online course',millio...
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Suggestion: , million
...C,'Massive open online course',million of people are enrolled in various onlin...
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Suggestion: a million
...,'Massive open online course',million of people are enrolled in various onlin...
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Suggestion: , internet
... website for public viewing. Secondly,internet has connected our world in a way that i...
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Suggestion: It
...in a way that it became global village. it has been playing a major role in bridgi...
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...ople who belong to different countries. for instance,social media sites such as Fac...
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Suggestion: , social
...ong to different countries. for instance,social media sites such as Facebook give us fa...
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Suggestion: , relatives
...cility of being connected to our friends,relatives who live in areas which are far away fr...
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Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'remain'
Suggestion: remain
... in areas which are far away from us.we remains in contact with each other with seeing ...
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Suggestion: Similarly
...with each other with seeing each other. similarly people can watch big sports events wher...
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Suggestion: similarly,
...with each other with seeing each other. similarly people can watch big sports events wher...
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because they' instead.
Suggestion: because they
...ts where they cannot go physically just because of they are happening in other countries.such a...
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...are happening in other countries.such as ,it is reported that 10 million people, b...
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Suggestion: In
..., watched football world cup online. in conclusion,as human being is constantly...
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Suggestion: , as
...tball world cup online. in conclusion,as human being is constantly leveraging in...
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Suggestion: , they
...eraging internets coffers of information,they will continue to evolve.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48484848485 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35806937625 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647727272727 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.2791441186 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.636363636 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126026715339 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500352093217 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299732307275 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.075944334851 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321921005858 0.056905535591 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.