The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing?
Nowadays, human are observed an exploding of the Internet which has significantly interfere with our ways approaching information. In my opinions, the conveniences brought by the internet cannot be denied, besides it, some of its negative impacts are also needed to consider appropriately.
To begin with, the most observable benefit is that people can have their desire answers in wink of an eye when asking for information on the Internet. Searching tools have ability to immediately give back up to five million results that related to users' key words. Lack of information is not a serious problem anymore, instead of spending all day longs struggling in massive libraries, Internet users can have up-to-date literature reviews in just one click.
However, there are some troubles when dealing with such abundant sources information. It is uncertain that whether this information is verified or not. Therefore, Internet users may get confused and even take up misleading acknowledgement. Furthermore, the Internet can become the best medium of criminal activities by taking advantages of its instantly exchanging information capacity. Illegal activities and information are broadly spread over management of competent authority . For example, privately information about any individuals is threatened to be published without any owners’ approval , which is absolutely read by thousands of Internet users and lead to extremely consequences associating to human rights and honors.
Last but not least, with the unstoppable development of the Internet, users are not only come in for its advantages but also being raised awareness about its potential risks. By this way, the Internet can become an effectively searching information tools by wiser users.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: interfered
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Suggestion: keywords
...e million results that related to users key words. Lack of information is not a serious p...
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Suggestion: .
...d over management of competent authority . For example, privately information abou...
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Suggestion: ,
...lished without any owners' approval , which is absolutely read by thousands o...
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Suggestion:
...associating to human rights and honors. Last but not least, with the unstoppable...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62406015038 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12922470055 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646616541353 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5104125419 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.076923077 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102375932487 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411252251576 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313441162381 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0691090348076 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239300316583 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.