The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before.
What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?
The enormous growth in the use of the internet over the last decade has led to radical changes to the way that people consume and share information. Although serious problems have arisen as a result of this, there are solutions.
One of the first problems of the internet is the ease with which children can access potentially dangerous sites. For example, pornography sites are easily accessible to them because they can register with a site and claim to be an adult. There is no doubt that this affects their thoughts and development, which is a negative impact for the children and for society. Another major problem is the growth of online fraud and hacking. These days, there are constant news stories about government and company websites that have been hacked, resulting in sensitive information falling into the hands of criminals.
It is important that action is taken to combat these problems. Governments should ensure that adequate legislation and controls are in place that will prevent young people from accessing dangerous sites, such as requiring more than simply confirming that you are an adult to view a site. Parents also have a part to play. They need to closely monitor the activities of their children and restrict their access to certain sites, which can now be done through various computer programs. Companies must also improve their onsite IT security systems to make fraud and hacking much more difficult by undertaking thorough reviews of their current systems for weaknesses.
To conclude, the internet is an amazing technological innovation that has transformed people's lives, but not without negative impacts. However, with the right action by individuals, governments and businesses, it can be made a safe place for everyone.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'for example', 'no doubt', 'such as', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.260450160772 0.247107183377 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.16077170418 0.155533422707 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0868167202572 0.0946595960268 92% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0353697749196 0.0501214627716 71% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0353697749196 0.0437548338989 81% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118971061093 0.122226691241 97% => OK
Participles: 0.048231511254 0.0403226058552 120% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.67711250483 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0353697749196 0.0326793684256 108% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0932475884244 0.0861772015684 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0225080385852 0.021408717616 105% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0192926045016 0.011925033212 162% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1758.0 1933.35771543 91% => OK
No of words: 285.0 316.048096192 90% => OK
Chars per words: 6.16842105263 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.39649122807 0.374742101984 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.312280701754 0.28420135186 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.214035087719 0.203846283523 105% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.119298245614 0.137316102897 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67711250483 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.037074148 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610526315789 0.56093040696 109% => OK
Word variations: 67.5384277062 60.7387585426 111% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.3571428571 20.7743622355 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5663839292 49.517814964 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.571428571 127.492653851 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7743622355 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.814263465372 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 51.5852130326 49.1944974215 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.84722222222 1.69124875643 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402734155344 0.332605444948 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0729660663684 0.102741220458 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0446355467202 0.0668466124924 67% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.499280161955 0.534860350844 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.13200990863 0.148594505496 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153452836761 0.134430193775 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0963541504444 0.0742795772207 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.32145976396 0.324371583561 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0815150072545 0.0638462369009 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.294945769188 0.228012699653 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871422278347 0.058150111329 150% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.