The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before.
What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?
These days, internet has been the biggest platform for sharing ideas and communicating with people across the world. Everyday in our life we hear about the predicaments of online activities, there is a growing tendency to combat it with a best solution.
To begin with, there are numerous issues related to internet. One of them is the hacking of various financial sites and user details. This is because the IT companies might not have incorporated proper security strategies. Furthermore, it has become possible to access those websites that are not legitimate like porn. It is important to note that, children can also access these sites, since they can add fake details about themselves. By viewing the contents of these type of acitivities, children might face severe mental issues, which finally end up in psychological consultation.
There are many steps to deal with such problems effectively. Firstly, the IT companies should implement all the security strategies including usage of HTTPS, always maintain encryption of data and avoid any loopholes for data vulnerability. Another scenario is that, parents must mentor their children, so that they can understand the side effects related with the illegal websites. Additionally, they can also install softwares that can be used to block vulnerable and illegal websites, hence ensuring they cannot access them while surfing online.
The use of internet will keep growing tremendously, at the same time it will increase the challenges to tackle the growing problems associated with it. From the above discussion, I see a great improvement in such a situation to tackle with the internet related issues provided the aforementioned measures are taken.
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- Some businesses find that their new employees lack basic interpersonal skills such as cooperative skills. What are the causes? Suggest possible solutions. 78
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
...unicating with people across the world. Everyday in our life we hear about the predicame...
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Line 1, column 238, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...is a growing tendency to combat it with a best solution. To begin with, there...
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Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...sites and user details. This is because the IT companies might not have incorporated p...
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Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...ith such problems effectively. Firstly, the IT companies should implement all the secu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37918215613 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88818158137 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646840148699 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6290574779 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.357142857 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169200226851 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544877995023 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504814065415 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982632081625 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276547002771 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.