With internet improvements, people can leave views or opinions on certain goods or services that they have purchased. Is it a good or a bad thing. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
As Internet develops, it is becoming common for online merchants or sellers to build up their own review systems to allow their customers to post reviews or shopping experience on their websites. From my own perspective, it is a positive advancement.
On the one hand, the sellers themselves may concern that their competitors could post negative comments on purpose, so that it would exert a considerable influence on their sale. Since the negative ratings would be shown on their websites and everyone could see them, some people might be misled by those false information and stop making purchase from them. Apart from that, there are extra cost and labors required to maintain this system. They need to hire IT engineers to established the system and more customer representatives to communicate with customers and tackle their problems.
On the other hand, it is advantageous for both the seller and the customer to utilize this scheme. The seller could collect more comments from their loyal customers and they would figure out which aspect they are not doing well in, thus they could make improvement. Additionally, they could attract more people to their products or services with a higher rating after the improvement. For general public, comparing with the traditional customer service by phone calls, it is more rapid and convenient to leave their opinions towards the items or services they bought as they do not have to wait for a long time on the phone line. Moreover, people have the chance to make comparison and select the better products or better sellers because of the rating system.
To sum up, there more merits for such an online review system than drawbacks, because it is beneficial for customers to choose the ideal items that want and for sellers to improve their qualities of products or services.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 390, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...igher rating after the improvement. For general public, comparing with the traditional custome...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, moreover, so, thus, well, apart from, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05610561056 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6331959849 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53795379538 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.4739361734 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.666666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110350181809 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438946904275 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468471083297 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0577808831473 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059505997061 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.