There are numerous professions in the modern world, there is the controversial issue is what kind of profession is more essential than other specialities. This essay will examine and compare two professions, such as a doctor profession and an inventer profession.From my perspective, both of type professions in equal measure are meaningful in any society .
On the one hand, it seems undeniable that a doctor is necessary in any community, how can people prevent themselves from spreading of the disease without medical professionals? Or how can people combat new emerging disease ? Certainly, it is inexecutable because only professional medical workers can prescribe recipes or do the surgery or offer an oral advice. For instance, according to the medical statistic, thirty percent of people have died because of incorrect provision of first medical aid . This statistic explains us that medical knowledge is the necessity . Moreover, as it is known that individuals , who do surgeries , possess special talent. And due to their talents, they carry out work which could not be accomplished by an ordinary person. By performing their functions, duties, numerous people have got into recovery, countless people have been grateful for treatments. A relatively large number of people who avoid the grave illnesses due to art of surgeons, giving rise to a trustful attitude to the medical staff. As a result, medical staff who are approved and given privilege to give health care are compulsory required in any society.
On the other hand, compared to a doctor, an inventer, in reality, reckons about new ways of tackling what went adversely, put new strategies to solve issues . Without a doubt, an inventer also plays significant role in any community because the countries have global issue, such as environmental issues, problem of conserving of natural resources . There is no doubt that these issues demand creative individuals who create new approaches, devices, allowing to alter the negative situations in these fields. It is proved that these gifted people yield benefits. For example, they invented the Internet, nowadays, enormous number books are not printed, they are published on internet websites, resulting people have saved wood which is used in paper productions. Or, another example, inventers have constructed electrical vehicle, these do not emit CO2, environmental repercussion has become more appropriate. Nevertheless, today's challenging world pose new emerging burdens day by day, enforcing inventers to enhance equipment's productivity . Thereby, inventers are in the demand of the modern world. Therefore, unfortunately, new issues appear daily and focus our attention, inventers is also the first requirements of the world.
In conclusion, it is challenging to opt for the profession which has the main position. Both specialities such as a doctor as well as an inverter in equal measure are needed in any society.
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- More and more people are busy with work and do not have enough time to spend with their families and friends. Why does this happen? What are the effects on family and society as a whole? 84
- There is certainly a difference in thoughts ideas and actions between children their parents and grandparents Why do these differences exist Does it cause problems in your community in your opinion 45
- Some people say it is the government’s responsibility to fund school buses, while others think parents should be responsible for bringing their kids to school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 35
- Nowadays people buy a lot of things even though they don’t really need them. Why is it happening, in your opinion? Is it a positive or negative trend for the individual and the society? 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2458.0 1615.20841683 152% => OK
No of words: 452.0 315.596192385 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43805309735 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05556844314 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 176.041082164 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58407079646 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 783.9 506.74238477 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.921170104 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.869565217 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.652173913 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5652173913 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0468909372808 0.244688304435 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0140260280589 0.084324248473 17% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0222890818779 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.030799202435 0.151304729494 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273094858583 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 144.0 78.4519038076 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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