It is becoming increasingly expensive for museums to be open to the public. Why is this happening? What would be the best solution to keep them open.
museums and historical places have been considered as an asset to the country because these are true indicator of culture. In recent years, more money has been required upon visiting these historical buildings. In my opinion, the main reason of this changing trend is, its maintenance needs more money to preserve its displayed monuments and articles. The best possible remedy is, the implication of rules to keep them save, so that people could not ruin our heritage.
The cultural diversification is the only thing that is inextricably bounded up with the nations people. because nations can only be recognized by their culture and heritage and museum is the best place to save our culture. visitors have to pay huge amount of cash to visit these sites because individuals, upon their visit actually write their names or phrases; although not permitted. it has been mentioned on many posters that writing or any damage to these sites are prohibited but still spectators show indecent behaviour in this respect. For instance; tourists and local visitors of London has to pay a huge amount to visit their museum because its waxed monuments requires specific conditions of humidity and temperature. In this way, the owner of those places have to maintain and preserve these sites that requires a huge amount of money.
In order to promote a sense to save our heritage, the government bodies ought to take care of these places that contain our traditional monuments and trinkets. Besides that, take carers must be assigned a budget to preserve these places. Management system should focus on awareness campaigns and implementation of rules to save theses sites. No matter who-so-ever, the law breakers have to pay a heavy-duty charge upon any misconduct. Rather than increasing the charges upon its visit, people should concentrate on preserving strategies of these sites. An economical ticket is enough to entertain its visitors but if any misconduct has been noticed then fine should be paid.
To conclude; nonetheless, maintenance of historical museums require a huge budget but they should be open to the public so that our cultural diversity remain alive, with payable entry ticket to keep amusement level higher of upcoming generation. it is the need of the hour to arouse awareness for the importance to preserve these sites and understand true purpose of historical buildings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, but, if, nonetheless, so, still, then, as to, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2009.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19121447028 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75498490808 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532299741602 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 649.8 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9138015441 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.611111111 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128222206411 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397348917506 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449362490946 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0853500514945 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388703950371 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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