It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
With the advancement in educational system, it has commonly been noticed that there are plethora of crash courses that can be done after completion of school. So the vogue of taking year break for tertiary education is now common but it has its own benefits and certain drawbacks that I shall discuss in the essay and will give logical conclusion.
To begin with, there is an advantage that a teenager can get themselves enrolled in any short term course that can help to have profound knowledge of the type of career a student want to get into. Also, students who are facing financial crisis gets opportunity to earn good and save for their higher studies. For example, most of the BPO’s appoints 12th pass out and give handsome amount of salary. Also, a year gap helps adolescents to work on their weakness in studies like IIT, an aspirant get enough time to excel in their subject and can clear the competitive exam. Therefore, it can be noticed a rest year can act as a breakthrough in there forthcoming career and management of time for exams.
On the other hand, obvious disadvantage can be seen that students become off track and lose interest in study when they get a year break. Besides, they do not want to continue with university education. In this way we might lose good professionals. For instance, medical professionals needs to study on university level failing to do so will not result in good medical staff. Moreover, in order to fulfill the appetency of flashy gadgets and attires students wants to get easy money without being concerned of getting graduated. This leads children to get into smuggling that do not lead to right path. Thus, a year gap cannot always be fruitful for many areas of professionals.
To conclude, I would rather say, a year gap is prominent as the students utilizes their time wisely, they get astronomical advantages from their hard work in the future. This overweighs the demerits of a year break.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81305637982 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66608912847 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584569732938 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6029432622 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.375 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0625 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126241103123 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447043090627 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385907372988 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772391929965 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333539746855 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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