In many countries, sports stars earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that sports stars earn too much money, while others claim that they deserve their high salaries.”
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is commonly believed that sports is a mode of entertainment and athletes should be getting high paid but at the same time majority of people think other work is far more important than sports and should be given more money. To be very price, I opine that salaries should depend on the importance of work by not ignoring the time and effort given to sports. This essay will shed light on both these views.
First of all, it has been noticed that since the ages, sports is considered to be a best way of recreation. Sportsman gives the entire time to practice and represent nation on national level. They not only have to improvise their skills but have to keep themselves fit to make their country win. Also, the life span of this profession is less in comparison with other profession. Therefore, government pay special attention by rewarding with high pay scale. For instance, cricketer like Sachin Tendulkar, who is always remembered for his great contribution and has always made country proud. Thus, it is becomes mandate to give high wages to sportsman as it always shows country is wealthy.
Most importantly, it has been observed that the solution for equal salaries is to cap it. The government should not be impartial and should make sure that the work involves more risk should be paid high like, doctor’s income has to be high as the work of saving lives cannot be ignored. For example, a recent situation of pandemic has proved that the life of medical staff is at high risk instead sportsman. That is why, it is important to give more money to those who work hard to make others life better.
In my opinion, country always want to showcase their image whether in terms of sports or other profession but priority of high salaries should be given to profession involving high risk of their life itself.
To recapitulate, I would rather say, representing country is not an easy task as it involves a lot of pressure that is why the salaries are high. Among all, other profession like doctors and engineers should not be left behind when it comes to pay them more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ce the ages, sports is considered to be a best way of recreation. Sportsman gives...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, for instance, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71857923497 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50954313422 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51912568306 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3876014912 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.588235294 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5294117647 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213987792533 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677505865406 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532194233569 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136327757968 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482616786569 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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