Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot join him/her. You’ve found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Explain why you cannot go anymore
Say who can go instead of you
Say why this person is a good person to go with
Dear Clara,
How are you doing? I was eagerly waiting to watch a movie with you after a long time! But, I’m sorry that I won’t be able to make it tomorrow as we had planned. My company has sent me a message asking me to be present in my office tomorrow because there will be a sudden audit to inspect my project. As I am the Architect of my project, my presence is important during the audit session tomorrow.
If you don’t mind, shall I ask my cousin Sheela to go to movies with you? I think I introduced her to you when you came to my birthday party last year. She works in my company and seems free tomorrow. Also, she is fun-loving and jovial in nature like us! So, she’d be the best partner for you to hang out.
Again, sorry for not joining you tomorrow. We’ll definitely watch a good movie together next month.
Best wishes,
Carol Langland
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 711.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38888888889 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29275081393 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672839506173 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2847098496 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.6363636364 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7272727273 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211974352959 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970493021482 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950732678964 0.0603063233224 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162403272658 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697593186035 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.59 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.