Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot join him/her. You’ve found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Explain why you cannot go anymore
Say who can go instead of you
Say why this person is a good person to go with
Dear Eva,
I hope you and your family is doing well. First of all, I would like to say thank you for making this incredible plan of watching movie together as I was eagerly waiting for the same. I have to say sorry this time because I cannot come along with you. Let me explain you the reason.
To begin with, I received a message from my esteemed organization that there will a sudden audit tomorrow to review my balance sheet. Moreover, I am into finance department so cannot abscond from the situation as it’s a mandatory. Also, I am the head of the team so has to handover indenture to compliance team.
As for the movie, I know the your that your favourite actor is playing a lead role. I have a terrific idea that you can go with my friend Sheela, whom you met last weekend on coffee with me. She is fun loving and jovial in nature. Besides, she’d love to accompany you as you both belong to same town . I am sure you will not get boredom in her company.
I would love to her the story, so make sure you watch it whole heartedly. Enjoy your weekend to the fullest.
Best Regards,
Urvashi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 26, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'your'?
Suggestion: the; your
...ance team. As for the movie, I know the your that your favourite actor is playing a ...
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Line 7, column 300, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...pany you as you both belong to same town . I am sure you will not get boredom in h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, moreover, so, well, as for, as to, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37019230769 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30142048558 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644230769231 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7656279806 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.6 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8666666667 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 4.34317383033 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385204591451 0.216113520407 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113724816559 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871187039991 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214740158447 0.12726935374 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139826127535 0.0580467560999 241% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.