It is becoming increasingly popular for people to travel to tourist destinations during public holidays.
What problems does this cause?
What solutions are there to these problems?
Travelling is an ideal solution to cut stress. Weekend getaways destinations are attracting huge tourist during national holidays. This essay will explain problems related to traffic and waste management in these locations during these breaks, and also suggest solutions to prevent these issues.
There are a couple of drawbacks of seasonal tourism. Firstly, the tourist favourite spots are always hit with traffic jams. Secondly, the destinations face issues of waste management as the number of litters increases during peak period. As a result, people have to stand in long queues to visit their favourite spot, and at the same time, they throw empty wrappers on the streets. For instance, during Independence Day all streets towards Red Fort are packed with vehicles and footpaths are covered with empty plastic wrappers and bottles because of people from all over India travel to Delhi for Flag hoisting ceremony.
The solution to eliminating these issues are promoting the use of public transport as well as set up dustbins at every footpath with a 100-meter gap. Moreover, during national holidays the government should transfer an ample amount of traffic force to popular tourist destinations. To illustrate, during Christmas break government in Goa install portable bin and every beach, and also get mobile restrooms near and around every bathing spot.
To conclude, major concerns of tourism during national holidays are traffic congestion as well as waste disposals, and both of the issues could be extinct if government have proper legislation during national holidays at every hot tourist getaway.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42857142857 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62574900231 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7348919395 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239017852922 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795165354603 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565446630254 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140338986127 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879320364622 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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