To have an optimum equality between office and family life is a cumbersome task for most of professionals and workers. This is prevalent more in countries with high labor supplies in comparison to meager demand. This essay will discuss the reasons and solutions for the same.
Firstly, many of us in millennial generation, are still trying to figure out what is best for us. The reason for it is that we are still evolving. But, we should always plan well in advance how to lead our lives. Most successful way to do it is to rank, both our professional and personal lives. So what, even if it does not happens 100% according to plan, at least we would be having clear long-term vision to reach our destination. For example, setting a yearly calendar with relevant task to achieve in a timeline is a great first step. In addition this, traveling time in major cities due to rush is not in our control. For this also, mindful usage of bicycle or public transport could be an option to balance out time for your loved ones.
Secondly, in labor market, it is hard to maintain efficiency and having highly skilled manpower. So exploitation of workers, specially working for more number of hours then stipulated by labor department is in common practice. Furthermore, this is not limited to physical availability of an employee. Even work pressure and deadlines could be taken to home which can have a consequence on other's life. For example, getting an annoying phone calls or message from your superior or colleagues after work time can affect one's mental space. To control this menace, a set of guidelines or provision should be made by Ministry of Labor or a law should be enacted for imposing strict penalties on companies hampering personal time or space of individuals.
To conclude, a balanced self approach to plan one's personal and professional time and to come together as a society to fight for your basic rights will ease out leading one's life in an enriching way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the professionals') or simply say ''most professionals''.
Suggestion: most of the professionals; most professionals
...nd family life is a cumbersome task for most of professionals and workers. This is prevalent more in ...
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Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'happen'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: happen
...nal lives. So what, even if it does not happens 100% according to plan, at least we wou...
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Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'happen'
Suggestion: happen
...nal lives. So what, even if it does not happens 100% according to plan, at least we wou...
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Line 3, column 544, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...in a timeline is a great first step. In addition this, traveling time in major cities du...
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Line 5, column 390, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...to home which can have a consequence on others life. For example, getting an annoying ...
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Line 7, column 47, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...clude, a balanced self approach to plan ones personal and professional time and to c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, at least, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79824561404 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68461978814 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599415204678 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9392932819 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61111111111 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2442795918 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703611940485 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408462730232 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144756877021 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304816834122 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.