Today, it seems that families spend less time together rather than in the past. There are some reasons for this matter that will be disused it in the following. Moreover, I will give some suggestions for dealing with this issue. I think they might be helpful to bring the members of the family closer together.
As a matter of fact, nowadays, the lifestyle of families has extensively changed in comparison to the past. In fact, both men and women make efforts to improve their family’s life. Therefore, both of them have an occupation and responsibilities outside the home that for this, they would spend more time in the office. Besides, their children also attend school and have some extracurricular activities that thus they cannot be with their parents and talk with them. Additionally, today with the development of technology, there are many social media on the internet that have attracted many people especially youngsters. Therefore, the members of the family especially children prefer to surf on those media instead of talking with their parents. Undoubtedly, these matters have made a distance between the members of the family.
Nevertheless, families can make some plans to reduce this distant and being close together. Firstly, they should arrange some activities that all members of the family are interested in. For instance, they can make a plan to have a day trip on the weekend. Secondly, they should put some regulations for the usage of the internet at home. For example, parents should not allow their children to spend all time on the internet. They should pursue their children to more talk with them about their friends and school.
To conclude, although, today, many people are buried in work and they are going to get success in their work because they would like to protect their family financially, they should notice that the members of family also need to support emotionally so they should arrange their time to be with their family.
- Some people argue that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others believe that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine However at best these methods are ineffective and at worst they may be dangerous To what extent do you agree with this statement 67
- It is generally accepted that families are not as closed as they used to be. Give some reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought closer together. 56
- You have received a letter from your university of Albion demanding a reason for your absence from an exam You were ill that day but failed to submit the evidence Write a letter to the Examinations Committee explaining your situation You should include Ap 73
- Young couples nowadays prefer to have fewer children than previous generations Most of them prefer to accomplish other goals in their life first Is this a positive or negative development 71
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in fact, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04573170732 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62316867651 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487804878049 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5753811001 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9444444444 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261548109569 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983424937029 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875602391062 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193639944041 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858728818686 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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