It has been said that the world is becoming a global village in which there are no boundaries to trade and communication. Do the benefits of globalisation outweigh the drawbacks?
In the last few decades, global trading has drastically increased especially daily needs. these global trend has spread across the world and daily need food travels a long distance. In my opinion, this kind of trends are hazards to the country's growth and the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.
First and foremost, global trading is not necessary for daily necessities, it can be produced locally and can be traded locally. To illustrate, when daily needs are being imported or transported a long distance, apparently, the cost of the goods will be more. To add to this, long-distance transportation of goods are causative factors for environmental contamination and also, a lot of natural energy such as fuel is wasted.
Secondly, local farmers will get affected by economically from this kind of trades. locally produced goods will lose its value if these goods don't reach to the market which will directly affect the country's economy. it may be the case where countryside youth will start leaving their villages seeking jobs which in turn jungle concrete will become more crowded where survival of becomes much more expensive as demand increases in the concrete jungle which will create a situation of instability across the country.
To recapitulate, global trading may be required for those goods which are not daily necessities. One should encourage the locally produced goods in order to support countryside people which will, in turn, boost the country's economy and also, it will eradicate the environmental contamination caused by transportation. Thence, disadvantages of global trades on daily necessities with respect to transportation outweigh the advantage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, first, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, kind of, such as, in my opinion, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4465648855 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00893382597 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583969465649 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3620442736 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.916666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138013481939 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577032696633 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456952723893 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916108148482 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332758969857 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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