It is inevitable that as technology advances, traditional cultures will be lost. It seems that we cannot have these two things together. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
In modern times, the issue of technology has become a matter for discussion.Many commentators are of the view that technology advances will make a development of the cultural whereas others feel that traditional cultures will be lost. I strongly agree with technology advances will make a development for reasons I will outline below.
From an overall perspective, there are a wide range of a number of reasons why people believe that technical knowledge has plenty of benefits .Perhaps the main reason why people are in favour of technology is because traditional cultures are being lost in my country. Beliefs will no longer valid with findings from science and technology. Technology development will improve education, heath and infrastructures etc. and it will bridge the gap between village and city. On the other hand it will bring both fundamental and non essential things from some other cultures. for instance, Facebook , the electronic library on Google, by using Facebook people lead connect with other popular cultural and knows the history of other cities, whereas the electronic library sounds pretty useful to the student who do not have huge library in there country for find all the books they need. A good illustration of that technology has a huge role in the development .
On the other hand,in some parts of the world traditional cultural still thrive. There are many tribes in the Amazon Rainforest, for example, the completely untouched with technology development.These tribes continue to hunt and gather food from the forest passed on to children and parents to the elder. In other words , there are some tribes in Africa who depend on agricultural still embracing with technology by cell phone to access them the weather prediction and marketplace. That assistances them to prosper therefore support their cultural.
In conclusion, technology advances is a topic which is very relevant to modern society. Overall, I would like to say that I agree with the idea that advances in technology will improve traditional cultural, whereas other traditional communities have survived and even flourished.
- It has been claimed that workers over 50 are not responsive to rapidly changing ideas in the modern workplace and that for this reason younger workers are to be preferred.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- It is inevitable that as technology advances, traditional cultures will be lost. It seems that we cannot have these two things together. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, still, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3649851632 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9494281306 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537091988131 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.358295811 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.533333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207217172668 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718184560668 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055639762119 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13895711287 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584616666394 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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