It is more important to invest in further education rather than to gain work experience after finishing university in order to find a good job.
Do you agree or disagree?
Many people agree that investment in Higher education can be more fruitful instead of gaining work experience after becoming a graduate. However, the issue is not entirely straight forward and arguments can also be made against the idea. In this essay, the debate will be discussed and given a concluding view,
On the one hand, those who support the idea of higher education for a good job cite various benefits, it can bring to an individual. Firstly, it opens up new avenues for individuals, meaning that plethora of job opportunities are available to them and they can choose the job career they want to. In addition to this, It gives choices to individuals to either become a professor, a sales executive or an entrepreneur. Secondly, It improves individuals time-management and people skills , which can faciliate him a new job in a company. For instance, a recent study by the IMF at Harvard University, shows that demand for higher education rose from 40% to 50% mainly by the graduate students.
However, opponents of this view points out that looking for a good job after graduation make this situation impractical in today's era because of the lack of skills and knowledge required for the job. Secondly, Graduates, can be overwhelmed by the set amount of questions being raised from HR during job interview. If Industry-led courses were to run , it could improve the job prospects of graduates. For instance, a recent study by World Economic Forum shows that 70% of young graduates remain unemployed for a period of about 6 to 12 months, while looking for a job.
Overall, it seems reasonable that the higher education plays a crucial role on one's career growth which can be a significant factor in locating the best job for him.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94576271186 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84946771654 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603389830508 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7456535601 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.583333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136146649292 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055243775315 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695111625256 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882658103044 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377845802754 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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