It is observed that communication between family members in today's time is less as compared to the past. However some people do not think so.
Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, it is noticed that interaction among family members has decreased in comparison to what it used to be put in the olden days. On the contrary, few individuals are not convicting this. I completely agree to the notion that communication has come down in the families in the recent time due to the introduction of technology.
To embark upon, globalization has brought the world closer as well as smoother flow of technical knowledge has revolutionized the innovations in the electronic devices. In the recent time, it has evolved as a boon for the society. Moreover, such accessories has become cheaper as a result their affordability as well as usage has reached to the mass. Similarly, behaviour of the humans has changed. They have started utlizing their liesure time on social media which has reduced the verbal communication among them. Furthermore, they find it rejuvenating and is also rampant among all the age groups of the society. Undoubtedly, there has been a sharp decline in the affection and bonding in the families. Likewise, teenagers are becoming maverick.
On the other hand, if you believe that conversation has become faster and smoother these days. Modern devices as well as social sites has brought people at distance places closer. Besides this, frequency of connecting is also risen as voice messages or texts are exemplary and has been espoused by the large group in the current time.
In conclusion,I vehemently advocate the statement that communication in the houses has been falling. Members are not expressing their feelings at home nor to the parents note to the parents.While,they are finding joy and enthusiasm in the mobilles or laptops which is having detrimental effects on the younger generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, similarly, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18021201413 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06067042165 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590106007067 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.2540538764 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.625 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103222282119 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0286564254289 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03564144464 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0634254328747 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359598015983 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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