It is often argued that it is difficult to get children to read. Why do you think this is? What measures could be taken to encourage children to read more?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
A growing number of people claims that persuading children to get into a reading is not an easy task to deal with. Certainly, it is my firm conviction that this phenomenon is caused by an excessive screen time which is allowed for young ones. Main viable solution to this issue would be the parents to become a role models for their offspring.
Absolutely, it is an indisputable fact that that a majority of youths do not fond of books, as they grow up with surrounding which which is filled with countless types of modern personal gadgets. As a result, they spend most of their leisure time occupied with smartphones, video game consoles, and tablets. These electronic devices are too stimulating for young generation to concentrate on reading skill. For instance, a survey conducted by Tech monthly magazine reported that 80 percent of school children aged from 8 to 16 favours the smartphone smartphone rather than possessing an e-book reader. Hence, I strongly believe that owning a personal gadgets indeed leads to the exemption of reading from their interest.
The primary solution to this problem would be an adults who should illustrate the joy and fulfillment of reading books, articles and newspapers. The reason is that younger generation tends to learn a new skill and a competency by imitation. Therefore, regular reading by parents, particularly, in front of the children enables them to acquire the fact that reading is a daily routine which must be present in human life. Practical salient example to explain this is that my grandfather's room was stored a collection of books, as well as newspapers. Even though I was prohibited to go through his books when I was a child, I grew up as a bookworm by watching him to read passionately. Thus, adults play a vital role for influencing the children to treasure the books.
In conclusion, the reading has turned into a not fun activity due to the youths youths are exposed to up-to-date electronic gadgets, and the parents ought to tackle this issue by reading in constant frequency in order to teach the delight of reading for their offspring.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96629213483 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81645496518 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567415730337 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6459316559 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.866666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7333333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210418175431 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681078065498 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387770981479 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128253669968 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210916106054 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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