Nowadays the portrayal of violence on media tarnish the minds of people, especially their younger audience. Some believe that there has been a spike in juvenile crime due to disturbing and gory images shown all over the media. In my opinion, although media can influence people a majority of youth resort to crime as they find the jury system is very lenient towards underage criminals. To curb this, punishments should be made severe and even small crimes should not be over looked by the judicial system.
To start with, the media today has glorified crimes such as stalking, eve teasing, cyber bullying, etc. Juveniles are made to believe that by doing so they will be appreciated by their peers and society alike. In addition, the law for minors is not very harsh and they are usually let out by a small warning or paying a minuscule fine. As an illustration, movies today portray that the only medium to show love is to follow or harass someone till the person finally gives in. Also, if the hero is caught by the police, he is released on bail citing the reason of love. This shows a wrong image in the minds of young people who believe it is very easy to get fool the police and other legal system.
In order to deal with this situation, the law for juvenile crimes should be made strict and no crime whether big or small should go unnoticed. Once fear is instilled the crime rates will drop. To give an example, according to a recent survey there has been a decrease in crime as the bail amount and jail period from juveniles has been increased. Therefore, making them aware that nothing is nonpunishable and even if they are arrested the price for release is too high.
In conclusion, keeping the aforementioned points in mind, the onus of change cannot be entirely put these factors. Is stricter law and regulating the media really going to reduce juvenile crime? Once, they acquire the thrill and receive the encouragement from others to continue committing crimes it is extremely difficult to control that person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 472, Rule ID: OVER_LOOKED[1]
Message: Did you mean 'overlooked'?
Suggestion: overlooked
...ere and even small crimes should not be over looked by the judicial system. To start wit...
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Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ether big or small should go unnoticed. Once fear is instilled the crime rates will ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, look, really, so, still, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7323943662 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45336750218 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591549295775 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.3065387558 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.8235294118 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8823529412 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05882352941 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255590232794 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758480727253 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560991897942 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154356868435 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457297290617 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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