It is said that the amount of violence on the TV programmes has negative effect on our social development and therefore should be reduced.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
TV programmes create an enormous effect on human mind regardless any gender I.e. young and old generation. Therefore, one can definitely emphasis on that our social development is getting undoubtedly negative though process. This essay will discuss how to get rid of this unacceptable vibrations with my strong support and examples.
In my opinion, I will completely go against with this intolerable scene broadcast through television. Let me showcase few incidents. Firstly, we have been witnessed of various kind of violence episodes which build an unexpectedly wrong mindset in children’s brain and attitude. For example, child abuse can be considered as most effective way of showing violence which may ruin their life.
Secondly, mostly in different movies or serials include murder or suicide scene. As an example, final destination movie shows few of those examples which leads to such type of mindset. As a result, people want to implement this activity to take revenge on someone. Now, in other hand, another type of violence is sacrifice. Let’s take an example of movie The nun, which shows mother sacrifices her own child which is a complete demotivating concept for a child as well as mother.
So, in order to take immediate action to stop telecast such series, films must go through witch few predefined criteria that assures people. So that, people can enjoy with their family. After all, we watch movies or series for reducing stress as well as enjoying quality time with our loved ones.
In conclusion, before telecasting any show through media, film makers must follow crucial steps and they should mention it when it is getting broadcasted.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, after all, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27881040892 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75608880179 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.698884758364 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7533480618 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.75 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8125 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144004628402 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043445863406 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400222161334 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0758718078092 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604649872421 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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