It is sometimes said that people should be encourage to get married before they are 30, as this is besth both for the individual and for society.
Do you agree or disagree?
Some people said that other people sometimes should be encouraged to get married before turning 30 years old and said it will be best for both men and women and also for our society. With regards to this, in my opinion, I both agree and disagree. First, I agree it is because before turning 30 years old will be the best time to have a family and get married. On the other hand, I do disagree also, because some people are not capable to build a family on that age.
In my point of view, yes I agree that men and women will get married before turning 30 years old, because on that age some people will be able to sustain the needs of their future family. Luckily, if you lived a life with a good or having a financial stability, and also if you get your Bachelor's degree at the right time and had a stable job you can survive, get married and have a happy family. Your life and your family will not be miserable. In addition, you can also help the society not to experience being poor.
However, I do disagree also. As I said earlier some people will be able to sustain the needs of their future family but unfortunately, what if you are part of our society that was not able to go to school at the right age and at the right time, you might get your degree after turning 30 years old. In this kind of situation, even though you get your degree late and you were able to sustain the wants and needs of your future family, you can still get married even after 40 or 50 years old. Also on that age you can still help the society by working so hard to survive everydays life.
In conclusion, it does not matter whether to get married before or after at the age of 30, also for me age is just a number so you can still build a happy family in the future. All you have to do is just prepare and work hard as long as you can, so that, you will meet the needs of your family and also your family's life will not be miserable. At the same time you will not be part of the unfurtunate people and you will be able to help our society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 24, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...e being poor. However, I do disagree also. As I said earlier some people will be ...
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Line 5, column 493, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... married even after 40 or 50 years old. Also on that age you can still help the soci...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, still, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.09523809524 5.12529762239 80% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05458455783 2.80592935109 73% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.37343358396 0.561755894193 66% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.4975855869 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.933333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339742079885 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137080806057 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102807331921 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250263736252 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112002592227 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.8 12.4159519038 55% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.43 8.58950901804 75% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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