It is thought by some that it’s better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is often argue that living standard in cities is far better as compare to countryside. This essay will discuss both the views and suggest how vital it is to live in an urban area.
On the hand, few individual believe that standard of living is better in cities. There are different reasons, which make them believe this. Firstly, at any given point, urban areas have more employment opportunities. People do not struggle much in order to get jobs. Most of the people in cities are employed as per their skillset level. For instance, an Indian company stated that in the year of 2013, 12000 people were migrated from the rural area of Utter Pradesh. Out of which, 9500 were got the employment within one month from the date of their migration. Secondly, Medical infrastructure in cities is more advanced hence people prefer to live in cities so that they can be treated immediately in case of any medical emergencies. Therefore, it would be more opportunistic to live in the cities.
On the other hand, masses claim that living in the countryside gives them relaxation. There are different reasons which make them believe this. To begin with, the cost of living in countryside is affordable and people spend a stress free life. As compare to city life, housing in countryside is so cheap. To cite an example, a UK company stated in their 2019 survey that 80% of countryside people have their own house in the rural area of France. Moreover, in countryside, people do not face problems like traffic congestion and pollution and this further help them to live a healthy life. Thus, few individuals states that living in countryiside is a better choice.
To conclude, this essay has discussed how some individuals give preference to city life due to easy employment; however, rest are inclined to live in countryside due to healthy atmosphere. In my opinion, life in cites is better as it gives stability to your future. If Government bring employment in rural area then hopefully we may see less individuals being migrated towards city to improve their living standard
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...living standard in cities is far better as compare to countryside. This essay will...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...w vital it is to live in an urban area. On the hand, few individual believe that...
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Line 7, column 338, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun individuals is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...in rural area then hopefully we may see less individuals being migrated towards city...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89235127479 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69315570627 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529745042493 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1072715081 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2380952381 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8095238095 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47619047619 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325793653505 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951602628124 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796580447234 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214671144376 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672640064224 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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